Animatic - First 12 seconds

Here's a rough animatic of the first 12 seconds of my film. There's actually more to this sequence which will make more sense of things. No critiques yet, please. Not until I get the rest finished, then you can rip it apart! (There's bad sound right now -- final voices aren't done) Enjoy!

"GASP! Those are endangered! You're hurting the environment, man!"

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A quickie. I hope all of your Valentine's Day quckies are better than mine... know what I'm sayin'?